literature

'Fear'

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Literature Text

I thrive in your heart
Live in childish scary stories
Hide under your bed
And inside closets
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I feed on the blackest places in your infected soul
Eat away at your mind
Blind your very sight
Create the "monsters" that haunt your sleep
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I move in the darkest of night
A shadow that follows you in the deepest of places
You know I'm there
Yet you choose not to know
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Can you guess what I even am?
~
I, AM FEAR.
Thought of this when I was sitting in the dark, with merely a flashlight so meh parents wouldn't whine to meh saying to 'go to sleep! you have school, child!!'

Not bad, ish what I think:)
But, of course, I would DEFINITELY love opinions and comments about this poem.

~If you please~
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thinking-about-it's avatar
its really striking but the comma after I in the I, AM FEAR doesnt make sense....